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Mrs.Nardella Send Instant Message
08:58am, Tue 29
what do u guys think about poems?

A mother is the one who loves you
A mother puts no drug above you
A mother will never make you cry
A mother will never make you want to die
A mother will help you fight your fears
A mother will help you stop your tears
A mother will keep you safe and sound
A mother will never let you down
A mother will daily say I love you
A mother won’t say I hate you
A mother won’t wish you were dead
A mother won’t forget what you said
A mother won’t close the door
A mother won’t let you be poor
Now I ask you, do you have a mother?
Cause’ I don’t, so don’t bother.


 


here is one what do you think?


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M. Flores
KS
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Are you the one that wrote the poem? If so, I think it is quite miraculous that you don't have a mother. I have heard of immaculate conception but this is totally new.
Other than that, I think the expectations in the poem are kind of unrealistic. My son cried yest. on account of an incident that happened between us and sometimes the mother has no control over whether or not you are poor. There is a difference between living on meager means and starving on the streets.

10:32am, Tue 29
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M. Flores
KS
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Oh, but sir, you are focusing too much on the technicalities and not on the deeper meaning. lol

11:02am, Tue 29
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M. Flores
KS
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So you are like all other critics and just skimmed till you saw a fault?

01:04pm, Tue 29
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Mrs.Nardella
LA
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Quote from skeeter
"Are you the one that wrote the poem? If so, I think it is quite miraculous that you don't have a mother. I have heard of immaculate conception but this is totally new.
Other than that, I think the expectations in the poem are kind of unrealistic. My son cried yest. on account of an incident that happened between us and sometimes the mother has no control over whether or not you are poor. There is a difference between living on meager means and starving on the streets."


yes i am the one who wrote it....i won a reward with this poem.....

01:10pm, Tue 29
skeeter Send Instant Message
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M. Flores
KS
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I never said it was bad-congratulations on the reward. Or did you mean "award"? Those also rhyme.

01:13pm, Tue 29
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Mrs.Nardella
LA
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"I never said it was bad-congratulations on the reward. Or did you mean "award"? Those also rhyme."


award...lol...lol...sorry



02:26pm, Tue 29
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Melinda
Colorado
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if this is based on your mother...then I feel sorry for you.

05:52pm, Tue 29
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Mrs.Nardella
LA
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"if this is based on your mother...then I feel sorry for you. "


some of it is and some of it isn't

07:11am, Wed 30




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